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nice poetry

03:09 Sep 12 2014
Times Read: 567


I found my heart

lying in a ditch

my precious heart

was treated so rot



gone here n there

to stitch it back

place in the chest

avoid rotten tracks



I thought it was safe

to use it back

n using it I found

it was so badly hurt



I couldn't feel its throb

it died so quietly

without any complain

not even I felt



and all that's left

is just some ash!


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Kataryia
Kataryia
10:33 Aug 28 2017

Would like to see more ..





warlordtwo
warlordtwo
11:12 Nov 19 2017

Are you writing more poetry? Would like to see more





Singlemomchica87
Singlemomchica87
00:51 Sep 24 2018

Very good poetry





Fallenangel123
Fallenangel123
11:21 Mar 03 2023

I love this. Can't wait to see the next one!








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